Thursday, 17 January 2008

Flash 55: For that special someone

Like the returning sun
after a long, cold winter
you filled my days with warmth and joy
you drove away my demons
you illuminated a world of beauty
bade me turn my face to you
to feel your caress

I close my eyes now
and like the summer sun
you are imprinted on my eye.

9 comments:

Jess said...

Ok, I give... What does "Flash 55" mean? And this one is very sweet.

Toadee said...

Thank you Jess, Flash 55 is a weekly project where contributors write a piece (fact\fiction, prose\poetry, whatever which has 55 words. You can find out more here http://susiestheboss.blogspot.com/2006/03/55-friday.html

I find it helps me develop my creativity.

Why not give it a try, you don't have to do it every week.

I find it helps me to develop my creativity

Little Wing said...

Thanks for visiting my blog, and this 55 Flash is beautiful.
Great piece of writing, toadee!
I will return!

S said...

Well that might be for a woman but Im guessing its for your lovely dog. I am sorry for your loss. Its amazing how much we can love our pets.

Akelamalu said...

That is just beautiful!

Thanks for visiting me and commenting on my 55. I'll be back to read more. :)

Chica said...

Very cool Toadee! :)

JesseTheCat said...

I love your peom Toadee...its really lovely.Perhaps I should join up as well.I need to develop my creativity,lol.I feel quite sleepy of late :)

JesseTheCat said...

sorry for the spelling errors.... :)

Toadee said...

thank you all for your kind words