Friday, 19 October 2007

flash55, badly written but heartfelt

If fate gave me a fortune
I'd still be incomplete
without the richness of your laughter,
the joy of your heart,
and the safe haven of your embrace.
I can never be poor
whilst feeling the eternity of your love
I can feel no cold or pain
in the warmth and peace of your arms

7 comments:

Shari Mead said...

Nice write Tim. I enjoyed, how nice to know that others feel the same about fortune and that what we have when poor we value even more.

Logophile said...

Awwww, makes me want to go hug my sweetie, very nice.

MONA said...

If you have love, you have it all...

You are the richest! :)

Snow White said...

Awww... GREAT 55!!!! Hope you have a great weekend! xox

snowelf said...

Toadee, don't you love how sometimes just the act of being loved makes all the world right. :)

--snow

Rebicmel said...

Tim, this is an excellent 55. To know love and be loved, how divine.

Toadee said...

*big sigh*