Thursday, 13 September 2007

Flash 55

He'd used her before
but at first he had been oh so gentle
taking it very slowly and handling her so very very softly.

Now he was an animal, desperate to get dirty.
Throwing her around, bending her to his will.
Pushing her to the limits of her endurance.

New cars, don't stay new forever!

16 comments:

Rebicmel said...

Tim I am the first wahoooo. Now you need to go to susie's blog and let her know you are up or I will leave your addy there, so ones can come and view this.

Awesome Flash and it has a twist that I love!!!!!!! Great one my Toadee friend. ((hugs))

Ambre said...

I shouldn't even be here yet as I have not written my 55, but Missy emailed me and so I wanted to see.

Welcome to Flash 55 Toadee! Great job!!

My 55 will be up some time tomorrow.

~smile~

Toadee said...

thanks you two!

I did leave a comment on Susie's blog. Is that what I'm supposed to do?

MIke Kilgore said...

Hey Toadee, welcome to the 55 club! Your dear friend Missy is running an ad campaign for your 55, so I stopped by. Great flash-glad I stopped! By the way, Ambre's always late...

Snow White said...

Welcome to the club! Wonderful 55! Have a great Friday!

Toadee said...

thank you Mike and Snow white it feels good to be here. Forgive me if I make any mistakes, I'm a bit lost.

Wonder how mich I'm supposed to pay Missy hehe

Mike are you saying I shouldn't hold my breath waiting for Ambre?

SeaRabbit said...

Oh...I like that a lot...
Great 55... from a non player...
;-)

Toadee said...

thank you searabbit

ArtfulSub said...

Good one. Who and where is Susie?

Magdalen Islands said...

Absolutely enticing!

Toadee said...

Susie is here

http://susiestheboss.blogspot.com/

thank you for the compliments!

S said...

OK Im here!!!! That is a terrific 55, personally I like my cars to run and thats about all I require.

Thanks for playing 55 with us! See you next week.

Toadee said...

glad to be here Susie.

You have a car that runs? wow!

snowelf said...

Hi Toadee!!

Welcome to the influential addictive powers of flash 55....

my favorite lines: Now he was an animal, desperate to get dirty.
Throwing her around, bending her to his will.

writing perfection...

--snow

MONA said...

LOL! that is so funny. I just love the twist in the end!

Well done!

Toadee said...

so kind of you to offer such positive comments Mona and Snowelf
I'm really looking forward to next Friday