Thursday, 20 September 2007

my second Flash55

He lies
as he falls into your eyes
already dreaming of his intense gratification.
Love you is easy to say
when he knows he'll have his way
anticipating his own fulfilment.

His truth is there
in a moment's distant stare
calculating the score.
and when she falls asleep
left, lonely in a heap
conveniently discarded.

15 comments:

Mike M said...

Nice 55!!

Flash said...

wow. Awesome....

Keep it up. you have some great talent here...

Toadee said...

hey thanks guys :o)

G-Man said...

Toadee..
Very very good 55!!
Thanks for playing..
Galen

Toadee said...

cheers Galen

MIke Kilgore said...

Great 55-glad to have you on board!

MONA said...

Love you is easy to say/ when he knows he'll have his way. How true!

Great 55!

Toadee said...

Hehe, I'm not saying I write from experience Mona

Snow White said...

Awesome job! Glad you played again!

S said...

He lies
as he falls into your eyes

Love it, love it!
Thanks for playing 55 with us, see you next week...

S said...

You know what, for me,

He lies
and I fall into HIS eyes....

snowelf said...

Whoa--toadee!!!
Wow!! This is incredible, sweetie!!
SO glad you joined us!

--snow

Toadee said...

thank you all, I love doing this

Rebicmel said...

Tim what more could be said than this. Great 55

Toadee said...

thanks Missy, good to have you back